Mosaic Plagiarism: Example 2

Did you catch this second example of mosaic plagiarism in the same passage, also shown in red?

Student Writer's passage:

Only two years later, all these friendly Sioux were suddenly plunged into new conditions, including starvation, martial law on all their reservations, and constant urging by their friends and relations to join in warfare against the treacherous government that had kept faith with neither friend nor foe.

Source passage, from Helen Hunt Jackson, A Century of Dishonor: A Sketch of the United States Government's Dealings with Some of the Indian Tribes New York: Harper, 1881, p. 178:

Contrast the condition into which all these friendly Indians are suddenly plunged now, with their condition only two years previous: martial law now in force on all their reservations; themselves in danger of starvation, and constantly exposed to the influence of emissaries from their friends and relations, urging them to join in fighting this treacherous government that had kept faith with nobody &mdash neither with friend nor foe.

This is not legitimate. Writers must either quote and cite or paraphrase and cite. Removing a few words here and there doesn't stop it from being "kidnapping."

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